Had a conference with my thesis director this evening.
Good news: my line of argument is sound, so no major philosophical problems to work through in the revisions.
Bad news: (and I knew this already. . .) My writing style at time tends to be too "informal and journalistic." IOW, sometimes too chatty and not philosophically rigorous enough. Mostly, this is about using non-philosophical terms to make philosophical points.
And he didn't like my title. "Too literary"! Oh well.